The Battle of Alatar by: Lukey (in Off-topic)

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 9:13 PM EST


The year is 1868, the Battle of Alatar is upon the lands of Ecthelion. There is a man, some say he is a sadistic man, others say he is a superior being, but all that is known of him for sure, is that he wants the people of Durin to lose the war, and perish, by stealing their weapons and armor. Only one man will be able to stand in the way of this super power. Only one man will be able to re-unite the forces of Ecthelion. Only one man... will be able to make a mean bowl of chili.

Chapter 1

There were three things the shaggy haired boy knew. War, Love, and Hope. You see, This young man lived in a time of war, when people didn't just live on farms and had a good time living life, they fought, hundreds of battles each and everyday, to show that they were number one.

One day, while our hero, Red, was inside making chili for him and his father, he heard some gun shots outside the door. He stopped the soup and ran out, and just as he got out, he saw his father, Blue, lying on the ground with a blood stained shirt on. "", his father whispered, "I want you to take my gun, and my horse, and stop Jonathan, he..*Cough*.. he is stealing all the weapons of the people, *Cough*.. so that we will lose the Battle of Alatar.", Red vowed on his father that he would get revenge on Jonathan and his evil minions.

Red set off, on his fathers horse, Seran, and began riding off into the horizon, with no knowledge about what adventures, foes and friends alike he was soon to encounter.

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 9:13 PM EST

I know it's not a lot, but don't worry, more chapters to come, and they will get bigger, this is just an opener

RedWolf March 22 2006 10:16 PM EST

red's my father now, eh? hmm, guess its better than being a pokemon :-P

RedWolf March 22 2006 10:17 PM EST

err, blue**

Flamey March 23 2006 12:29 AM EST

pretty good story, looking forward to more :)

BootyGod March 25 2006 11:00 AM EST

Woot to the Lukey man.
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