The Battle of Alatar: Chapter 2 (in Off-topic)

{CB1}Lukeyman March 23 2006 10:34 PM EST

Chapter 2

As our faithful hero, Red, soon discovered, it wasn't easy surviving out on your own. He was thirsty and hungry after his first day of travelling, his horse, Seran, was tired, and wouldn't go any further. Red saw a little village over the hill, and decided it would be best to stop there for a little and have a rest.

He went into the village, and found no one out on the streets, it was a bring and beautiful morning, why wouldn't anyone be out on such a fine day such as this? thought Red. He got off his horse, and cautiously walked around by each house, looking for any sign of life. He thought he heard something inside a barrel across the road. Weapon drawn, and crouching down, he crept over the the barrel, and pushed off the top, and a man jumped out and startled him. "Hey, watch it!", said the strang man. "Who are you?", asked Red, "And what are you doing in a barrel?" The man said that his name was Dark, and he was in the barrel because he was hiding. "Hiding from what?", asked Red. "From the Memonites", replied Dark. "Who are they?", "They are the most ruthless killers in the world, they are mercenaries, killing for money. They are led by a powerful killer, Mem, he has a pet dragon that can kill a man with a bite.", "Wow, sounds really bad, where are they at?", "They never stay in one place, they are always on the move, looking for more people to kill, they wipped out everyone in this town, and Mem's Dragon, IA, ate all the bodies, that what it does, devours all the bodies the Memonites kill.", "Thats just disgusting." said Red. "Well, I'm going to keep travelling, I'm going to stop Jonathan, and end this War.", "Could I come with you?", asked Dark. "Can you weild a sword?", "No, I'm an archer, I have my bow and arrows in the barrel." He looked in the barrel for a second, and took out his bow and arrows, and off Red and Dark went, to unknown enimies.

smallpau1 - Go Blues [Lower My Fees] March 23 2006 10:38 PM EST


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{CB1}Lukeyman March 23 2006 10:45 PM EST

:D hows it lookin?

{CB1}Lukeyman March 23 2006 10:51 PM EST

Link To Chapter 1

Hyrule Castle [Defy] March 23 2006 10:54 PM EST

read em both, and they pretty good, chilli part was funny :D

Flamey March 24 2006 12:53 AM EST

its great! looking forward to next chapter

Ragatag March 24 2006 1:52 AM EST

looks marvelous

{CB1}Lukeyman March 24 2006 6:20 AM EST

Thanks everyone :D

BootyGod March 25 2006 11:11 AM EST

/me carps Lukey in a congratulatory fashion.
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