Battle of Alatar: Chapter 3 (in Off-topic)

{CB1}Lukeyman March 25 2006 8:58 PM EST

If you have not read Chapters 1 and 2, I suggest reading those before reading this.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Our relentless hero, Red, and his new found friend, Dark, travel along the root filled trail in The Woods of Klinik. They were walking for quite a long time, until Dark piped up and said, "I'm hungry, can we try to find something to eat?", "Yeah sure, there should be some animals around these parts.", Red replied. "Hey, whats that over there?", asked Dark as he pointed over to a moving bushlike thing. "Don't know, lets see if we can catch it!". Red and Dark slowly moved over, hiding behind trees and boulders, they got close to the creature and drew their weapons. The creature turned around and faced them, Red began to put his sword back as he saw the cute little face of the ceature, and just as he was about to say, it's ok, to Dark, he fired an arrow at the creature, and the creature, with surprising quickness, dodged the arrow, and lunged at Red's neck. Dark jumped in frightfullness and said, "Watch out Re....", but before he could finish, the creatures head was already hitting the ground, blood dripping off Red's sword, he said that it was ok, and that they should keep on moving, things weren't as they seemed in this forest.

As they continued their quest in the forest, they came upon a girl, sitting alone in the woods. Red rushed over to ask her if she needed any help. As he turned her over, he saw that she had no face, and she felt really dry. All of a sudden, Red felt a sharp pain in his arm and Dark jumped up as he heard the gun shot. They heard a loud buff voice that said, "Hold your fire!", and Red, trying to fight the pain, lay on his back, shocked by the sudden pain. The man came over, and Red, with his eyes beginning to close, saw Dark's face, and another man beside him.

DD34isback(justkidding) [Severswoed Accounting] March 25 2006 9:06 PM EST

make it longer/more details/add characters my 3 cense

Nakmirax March 25 2006 9:07 PM EST

nice, I'm really getting a kick out of these stories. Keep up the good work.

DD34isback(justkidding) [Severswoed Accounting] March 25 2006 9:13 PM EST

but i like it

Ragatag March 25 2006 9:26 PM EST

cool.. great job

{CB1}Lukeyman March 25 2006 9:33 PM EST

Fine Dark, just for you, I'll start Chapter 4 now, and work on it for a little tomorrow, and try to make it a big one for tomorrow night

RedWolf March 25 2006 9:47 PM EST

*gasp!* will i live!? is Dark a traitor? who is the mysterious faceless girl? oh the suspense!!


{CB1}Lukeyman March 25 2006 10:06 PM EST

Haha, thanks Red

BootyGod March 26 2006 1:35 PM EST

/me carps Red and congratulates Lukey on another masterpiece.
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