The Battle of Alatar: Chapter 8 (in Off-topic)


{CB1}Lukeyman April 7 2006 10:43 PM EDT

Chapter 8

          Pixel pulled Red onto his feet, and walked over to a rock sitting on the ground and took a seat. He pulled out a water skin and had a drink.
            "Here." He said as he tossed the skin over to Red.
            "Thanks... Gross, what is this stuff?"
            "It's called Columbian Juice; it revives you if you're really tired and weak."
            "Cool."
Pixel walked over to Desy and asked her if she was ok.
            "I think so." Said Desy.
            "Here, let me check." Replied Pixel as he placed his hands on Desy's shoulders and closed his eyes.
            "Oh!" Cried out Desy.
Red jumped in between then and unsheathed his Katana and pointed it at Pixels throat.
            "Relax Red" Said Desy, "I liked it."
Red turned around and gave her a look, and turned away to speak with Pixel about what they were going to do next.
            "So who are you anyway?" asked Red.
            "My name is Pixel; I am an Enchanter from the fields of Jigorokano. Jonathan has destroyed my lands and killed all of my people, I am the only survivor I know of, and I fled to try to defeat Jonathan and his army."
            "Alright well, thank you for saving us there. Will you join us to go and fight Jonathan?"
            "Of course I will, let us get out of this forest first, come, follow me; I know a safe way out."
          Red and Desy followed behind Pixel as he led them through the forest, and before long, they were out into what would usually be the crisp, clean air of Hyrule Castle, but instead smelled putrid of blood and rotting corpses.
            "Oh..My..Goddness!" cried out Desy as she fell to the ground, the smell too strong for her.
Pixel mumbled a few words and a bubble formed around them.
            "There we go; this will keep the smell out."
          They walked down to the city, Red walking close with Desy because she did not wish to see the lifeless bodies on the blood stained streets. As they were walking, Red held up his hand in a motion to stop, and to get down. The three crouched down and Red took out his sword and began walking over to an overturned dumpster. He got closer and peered inside and what he saw frightened him, he turned away in an instant and fell to the ground.

          King Th00p was looking around his kingdom desperately for his daughter, Desy.
            "It was those two boys, I know it!" he proclaimed, "And where is Sir Leon!"
A boy then came running up to him.
            "Sire, one of the cavalry men spotted the two boys and the princess entering the Forest of Memonites."
            "What?!? Are you certain?"
            "Yes your highness. I am sor-"
            "No time for crying, we must assemble a troop to go and get my daughter.
            "Megaman!"
A young man came running at the sound of the king's voice.
            "Yes milord?"
            "Gather your men; we ride to the Forest of Memonites to get my daughter back!"
            "As you wish."
          Th00p, Megaman and 3 other riders rode towards the Forest of Memonites. They got into it, and began trotting on their horses. Th00p couldn't help but feeling paranoid in such a dangerous place.
            "Stay together men." Whispered Th00p.
            "Alright, Pit?" said Megaman.
            "Ai Sir."
            "OB?"
            "Here Capt'n."
            "Davis?"
            "Davis!? Where are you?" cried out Th00p.
            "Men, alpha formation, stick close and weapons at the ready" said Megaman.
There was a cry from OB as he was swept off his horse and dragged up into the treetops and another from Pit.
            "Sire, stay close to m-" but before Megaman could finish, he was gone, and Th00p, King of Elmoth was all alone.
            "Wh...who's there?!? Come out, I say!" said Th00p, mustering whatever courage he had left in him.
There was a clap from the trees and his horse bucked up and he fell off and onto the ground. As he sat there for a second, he came to his senses and felt a thud on his lap. As he looked down, it was the rotted corpse, half eaten it seemed, of the boy who was at his castle, Dark. He let out a faint shriek and he looked up, but before he knew what happened, he saw fifty-eight sharp jagged teeth flying down towards his head.

{CB1}Lukeyman April 7 2006 10:44 PM EDT

Stupid Microsoft Word, it's back to Wordpad for the next chapter, sorry for all those A things, it's still readable, and it won't happen again :D

[me]Davis April 7 2006 10:45 PM EDT

i love it... cause im in it :P. Seriously though nice lukey...

QBOddBird April 7 2006 10:45 PM EDT

Hah! Wimp. It takes fifty-nine sharp jagged teeth to frighten me!

DD34isback(justkidding) [Severswoed Accounting] April 7 2006 10:46 PM EDT

so... something ate me... :( nice story cept for the “s and the cliff hanger :P

{CB1}Lukeyman April 7 2006 10:49 PM EDT

Mem's dragon "IA" ate you, and killed all the others, just for those of you who are not keen enough to observe that, tried to make it obvious, but it was hard, haha

Mem April 8 2006 12:03 AM EDT

I understood it.

I'm a bit disappointed to see that I didn't get to have some huge, sweeping, traditional battle with King Th00p though. I would have liked to read about that...

SNK3R April 8 2006 2:21 AM EDT

Fixed the Â's. :)

{CB1}Lukeyman April 8 2006 10:21 AM EDT

Thank you so much SNK :D

And Mem, haha, you had your killings :p Maybe next time

Hyrule Castle April 8 2006 10:35 AM EDT

its good again, expect.... apparently i smell of "putrid of blood and rotting corpses."

well......... i can take a hint... ima go shower

.... then off to work

gj man :D

Ammon [The Black Tower] April 9 2006 9:12 PM EDT

*wonders if he will be in it ever, shrugs* good work

th00p April 10 2006 3:08 AM EDT

Wow... nice bit killing King th00p, I wonder if he will ever show up to comment on it? Such a great role to have without at least a little bit of feedback...
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