The Battle of Alatar need HELP! (in Off-topic)

Hey, for my story, I want the final publish to be.. well.. good :p so am I looking for like 1 or 2 people to help me read it over, proof read it, and help check for errors, or places where I could add some more things to detail it better, or better ideas for parts.

If anyone can do this, please help me!

You'll be my best friend =D

As the first critic: Pfft!, I'm still not in it!!!!!

I can. I seem stupid and I am sure there are better people, but I can handle it if you want.

AND IM STILL NOT IN IT!!!!

I'll help you out with grammar/spelling/construction and the like....I tutor college students in English101/102, so I think I could probably help. =) But then, so could nearly everyone else. This game's full of smart people. ~_^

The point is, I can help and I will help.

E-mail it to me when you've got something to look over.

Awesome, thanks.

Lukey put me in it somewhere. :P