My short film needs your support! (in Off-topic)

Square Eyes

Good stuff. The title kind of gave it away a little but a nice ending.

:)

I think the title was perfect. It let me catch on whereas i probably wouldn't have until a few minutes after the the end. lol

Keep up the good work Mem. :-)

The buzzing was horribly annoying. Of course, it was there as a sound of "spying" or "bugging" a line, but I just think it was a bit too much audio-wise.

Other than that, I liked it. Nice job.

Very Asimovesqué, I liked it.

Have a number of problems against the film so I'm point out what was good. Camera position was fair to good. Lighting time(although saturated) was great with setting. Well timed movement and editing stands out. Special effects on TV head along with the cut to TV head was pleasing.
Liked it, though the annoyances of mono audio and bad short term acting come to mind while watching and in retrospect.

Wow that sound was annoying,
so are a lot of things though.
I enjoyed it. :)

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