Looking for feedback on an essay (in Off-topic)


Zoglog[T] [big bucks] August 27 2008 12:20 AM EDT

You don't need to be an expert in this area, just need some feedback on overall comprehension and if it seems right for someone with basic understanding. For once I pretty much hit the word limit dead on (9 words short but that's fine) so don't need advice on length although maybe you feel cutting an area or 2 short to make another area longer is in order then let me know.


Compare and contrast the use of futures and options as derivative instruments and in their applications to hedging.

Futures are when a price is agreed before the sale of a good, usually well in advance. The price rarely equals the market price upon sale, sometimes higher and sometimes lower but there is no uncertainty. The most common area futures are used are in farming where farmers cannot be certain of how well the market will be doing during harvest and so agree prices months in advance. The downside to futures is that if the market does a lot better than anticipated, the individual has lost a large amount of potential income.
Options are the opportunity to buy or sell in the future if the price is right. For a premium an individual can request securities to be bought up when their price is below the futures contract and then be sold when above the futures contract. Options are a right but not an obligation, the individual still has the final say on whether or not the securities are purchased or sold. Barrier options are commonly purchased due to the risk factor of being a bet solely on whether or not the security will reach the ムbarrierメ price. The downside to barrier options is that if the price of the security does not take the correct action by the expiration date of the option then the option expires worthless leaving the individual with what they started less the premium.
Therefore although both are relatively secure derivative instruments, one fixes the individual into a contract whereas the other allows the individual to make a choice after a reccommendation.
Hedging is when an individual purchases what they believe to be an under-priced security and then purchases other related short sale securities in order to offset some of the risk associated with the security they are hoping for a big return from.
Hedging with futures is a way to reduce the risk associated when there is certainty that an asset needs to bought or sold at a later date. A future seller can take a short hedge to lock in the price of delivery while a future buyer can take a long hedge to lock in the price of the purchase. The financial result may not be any better by doing this but as with all futures there is a lot less uncertainty surrounding the actual price when the contract comes to fruition.
Hedging with options is a much more difficult process especially when dealing with barrier options. It is not common practice to hedge with multiple barrier options but in order to work around the situation, investors are known to combine barrier options with normal options. To gain this effect, investors generally have to trade in many normal options in order to obtain the same result as a single barrier option. By trading in so many securities the investor has a lower level risk since it is likely that they will recoup at least a percentage of their investment and is unlikely that all options will result in losses.
Hedging with futures is very common in international businesses which deal with foreign exchange rates. Deals between companies within different areas of the world can often fall apart due to fluctuations in the exchange rates. Without hedging with futures either one of the companies will be worse off than the other on a daily basis, as soon as the exchange rate changes, one company benefits more than another. Hedging with futures therefore sets a price which both parties can agree on for a prolonged period of time rather than worrying about the possibility of the financial integrity decreasing due to a drop in either economy. The futures market in exchange rates is very liquid due to a large number of participants willing to trade their foreign exchange futures. The amplification or leverage of futures where a one percent change in future price can bring about a ten percent change relative to the original investment can be rather risky. The profit increase will gladly be welcomed but a loss could still hurt a company.
Hedging with options is also common practice within the foreign exchange market and also a lot more profitable for buyers due to them having a right but not an obligation to buy or sell whereas sellers, while being obligated to sell should a call option be used, receive a premium by forgoing this right. Hedging with options in the foreign exchange maket works by the buyer purchasing the contracts at a price they want and then either selling upon a reduction in value or allowing the contract to expire if the rate were to appreciate constantly allowing them to forgo the premium but receiving a larger return overall.
The arguments between the two being used in the foreign exchange market ar significant and thus is why both are very commonly used.
Futures remove uncertainty but can result in the exchange rate being worse for the party purchasing them if the market rate were to become more favourable in future. Cash flow can also be a problem as any daily variation which is unfavourable to the contract must be paid for by the trader.
Options on the other hand are safer in that the buyer has the right to sell whenever they wish to on or before the expiration date of the contract. The variation aspect is a characteristic of options rather than the static nature of futures so the margin payment does not apply to options and therefore improves cashflow. The downside to the fact that options are so flexible for the buyer is that they are then more expensive.
In my opinion I would recommend hedging with options within the foreign exchange market due to their flexibility concerning the constantly fluctuating nature of the foreign exchange market, while more expensive they are much more suited as derivative instruments in this sector.

Admindudemus [jabberwocky] August 27 2008 12:32 AM EDT

during harvest and so agree prices months in advance

should probably be something like "so agree on prices"

The arguments between the two being used in the foreign exchange market ar significant and thus is why both are very commonly used.

ar should are

thus should be this

the arguments between the two make it sound as if the two types are arguing amongst themselves. perhaps you meant the arguments for the two being used

Zoglog[T] [big bucks] August 27 2008 12:56 AM EDT

Thanks for the input, didn't notice the 'are' typo and generally, although I'm a grammar nazi at the best of times I doubt I'll get marked down for what is there for a finance essay.
I'd definitely have taken it fully on board if it were to completely ruin my point but I think only the 'are' and the 'arguments for' suggestions are the only ones needed.
Anybody feel that content needs to be altered in a way to take explanation away from one area in order to further expand a more important one or do we feel that content is generally fine as it is and that there are enough for and against arguments for each point?

SNK3R August 27 2008 12:59 AM EDT

I'm patiently waiting for Bast's opinion. :)

Picasso August 27 2008 1:14 AM EDT

Are you going to be turning this in as a hard copy or using an online service such as TurnItIn.com? Because if you turn it in online, it may find this post out there in the net and set off the plagiarism alarm...

Obscurans August 27 2008 1:51 AM EDT

A question, what level is the essay supposed to be at? The concept of a word limit makes me put it under university level.

P1
"The price rarely equals the market price upon sale" - of the instrument or the good?

"The most common area futures are used in are farming" + run-on sentence
"and so agree on prices months in advance"

I suggest a distinction between price of a good and performance of its constituent market

P2
Second sentence unclear; everyone can buy goods any time they want, what use is the security? (from the ignoramus in me)

"leaving the individual with what they started less the premium." - he loses the premium is simpler?

P3
"after a recommendation."

Break paragraph 4 into more than just one long sentence.

P5
Why is there any uncertainty if the price is locked in the futures contract itself?

P6
Two clauses joined with "but" imply negation: id est after "It is not common practice to hedge with multiple barrier options", the next clause should be describing a situation in which it happens, not the alternative to it.

P7
How will deals falling apart affect companies?

Third sentence has little link between the phrases; the middle phrase can be attributed to both the first and last one to different meaning.

Better explain financial integrity and amplification/leverage - 10x is not the only possible way.

P8
More run on sentences you know like the other ones above. Use semicolons for the more "major" divides.

P9
"The arguments between the two being used in the foreign exchange market are significant and this is why both are very commonly used."
Arguments between two things? I supposed securities were inanimate. Rest unclear.

P10
"if the market rate were to become more favourable in the future."

P11
Variation aspect and static nature confuses me.

"Options are so flexible for the buyer that they are more expensive" sound less cluttered?

P12
I see scant justification for a position thrown from thin air at the last sentence. You would usually state it at the start and support it.

Zoglog[T] [big bucks] August 27 2008 6:34 AM EDT

No offense but some of what I have read in your reply there makes me not want to pay attention to the rest due to the fact that you haven't listened to me and offer some rather absurd changes.
I stated grammar was not a problem unless it destroyed my point, apart from the ones already suggested that I agreed upon and OB getting me to change 'thus' for 'this' I don't see any that are problematic.
Both futures and options are just instruments aiding in settling on the right price for the good, financial instruments never have their own price other than a premium on some which is stated for options.
An option has limits which I do explain further into the paragraph if you read far enough into it.
"How will deals fall apart?" Read the next sentence in future.
If I changed it to just 'they lose the premium' I would then get more questions on 'what else was there?'
Uncertainty over the actual price rather than the contractually agreed price. I'm not always the best at explaining but that's more than simple enough for 99% of people.
10x is an example and that's how it stays, this is a short essay, not a dissertation where I have to pick apart every possible outcome.
I've already explained how futures fix a price whereas options run with the ever-changing market and the consequences involved, what more do you want to explain variable and static?
Also, yes there were spelling mistakes which I noticed and corrected immediately after posting.
Finally, I'm not a government, I bring both sides of the argument together and then I make my decision rather than making one and then justifying it, that just causes bias and leads to facts being ignored in an essay.

Little Anthony August 27 2008 7:06 AM EDT

what about short selling? what about "buy high, sell low".


Futures remove uncertainty but can result in the exchange rate being worse for the party purchasing them if the market rate were to become more favourable in future.

""""-----Futures does not remove uncertainty-------"""" Anything in the future remarks high risk.


Cash flow can also be a problem as any daily variation which is unfavourable to the contract must be paid for by the trader.


""""----NO, futures can be bought without paying in full, a partial deposit can be accepted, day trader sometime can sell futures without paying a dime up front.----"

Overall, i think you need to spend more time on research, because...well the rest of essay is simply questionable.
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