A few days ago, my girlfriend asked me to write a love song about her. She knows I used to write songs in the past, and decided she wanted me to write one for her now. I figured since she wanted one, I'd see what I could do. It's been awhile since I've tried to compose anything (over 2 years) and am looking to get peoples opinions on what I have come up with.
It was mostly written on the spot in about 10 minutes, but I gave it some fine-tuning later on. Let me know what you guys think.
Ratings on 10 are appreciated :)
Thanks.
--Emotion
The first day we met
What you were wearing
Or what we had said
Would you go back
To how things were before
Or do you ever think
You could have gotten more
Your smile makes me smile
Your love means the world
It canメt be explained
So maybe thatメs why
Youメre always on my mind
All I can think about is you
And the incredible feeling
When you said I love you too
First kiss with you in my arms
Really made me believe
We could be together forever
And I hope you will never leave
Your smile makes me smile
Your love means the world
It canメt be explained
So maybe thatメs why
Youメre always on my mind
All I can think about is you
And the incredible feeling
When you said I love you too
It only took three months
To realize my feelings were true
I think itメs safe to say
Iメve fallen in love with you
Your smile makes me smile
Your love means the world
It canメt be explained
So maybe thatメs why
Youメre always on my mind
All I can think about is you
And the incredible feeling
When you said I love you too
Before I end this song
I have just one thing to say
And thatメs I love you babe
And I hope you feel the same way