Random ode and a long distance dedication... (in Off-topic)


j'bob May 23 2009 7:20 PM EDT

heh, just found this.. I think I started it after having primed an enclosed basement room with bullseye.

A long long time ago, I can still remember,
how the ooty used to make me smile.
And I knew that I'd find a way,
to teach him what comes after the letter A,
but Hal never had that much to say but,
"Dave, I can't let you do thaaaat"...
Soo hey hey, ooty this is a B,
it's the letter that is caught between an A and a C,
and I can't tell if you are listening to me,
cause that pirate hat is all i can see...
that pirate hat is all i can see...

Admindudemus [jabberwocky] May 24 2009 2:03 PM EDT

did you write the book of love
and do you have faith in jon above
if the nightstrike tells you so?

SuperHD May 24 2009 2:31 PM EDT

and I can't tell if you are listening to me,
cause that pirate hat is all i can see...
that pirate hat is all i can see...

wow J'Bob thats intense ! you're a very good writter
i can see images in my mind when i read your poem, about a men drafting on his boat on the ocean unable to control is reason about good and evil and deepdown knowing in reconfort that is pirate hat is still firmly in place on his head. Just like a mother duck on her little baby egg, giving it heat and reconfort for its future intrusion into life, for the next project that his clever mind, heated by the cavity between the top of his head and the pirate hat, will create in the name of the gloryious life itself.

TheHatchetman May 24 2009 4:31 PM EDT

Navy SEALs > Pirates :P
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