Forging capitalisation and formatting (in General)


Phaete February 19 2011 1:51 AM EST

Currently the forging output looks like this:

your smithing wand is cool to the touch
You quench your smithing wand in the water
You see blue spots on the surface of your smithing wand
You quench your smithing wand in the water
You detect a faint red glow from your smithing wand
You quench your smithing wand in the water
your smithing wand glows a dull cherry-red
You quench your smithing wand in the water
your smithing wand glows orange-red
You cast a spell.
your smithing wand glows orange-red 

I suggest 2 things:

Capitalise first letter in 'your smithing wand ...."
Indent (or put an asterisk in front or something like that) the result for the action for better overview

It would look like this then:

 * Your smithing wand is cool to the touch
You quench your smithing wand in the water
 * You see blue spots on the surface of your smithing wand
You quench your smithing wand in the water
 * You detect a faint red glow from your smithing wand
You quench your smithing wand in the water
 * Your smithing wand glows a dull cherry-red
You quench your smithing wand in the water
 * Your smithing wand glows orange-red
You cast a spell.
 * Your smithing wand glows orange-red 

oh, and perhaps add 'smithing' to the spellchecker :D

Kefeck [Demonic Serenity] February 19 2011 11:41 AM EST

I like this suggestion

Guardian February 19 2011 12:23 PM EST

very good idea

Shadow Ruler February 19 2011 3:11 PM EST

great idea

AdminNemesia [Demonic Serenity] February 19 2011 3:13 PM EST

Nice idea for a papercut suggestion.

Lord Bob February 19 2011 3:30 PM EST

Yes.
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