A story of hope and honor and truth. (in Off-topic)


{CB1}Lukeyman March 21 2006 10:37 PM EST

This is a story not for the faint of heart, it is a story full of conviction, honor, hope, determination, and love.

One day, While Reddeh and Lukey were walking along the road, he looked down and saw a little girl sitting on the side of the road. He looked into her eyes, and her to his. He told me, "Lukey... do you have a map? because I'm lost in this girls eyes."

I said no I don't, sorry, and he said that's ok, I'll stay in here forever.

The girl said her name was Desy, and she was just strolling on through SeaBee town, but she got lost, and decided to sit down here to take a little rest.

We told Desy she could join us on our trip to the mountain of Jonathan, she said ok.

So off the three of us went, through SeaBee Town and into the forest of Edyit. Desy said she heard some tales about this forest, of how if you get caught be Edyit, then he turns you into an OddBird, which is the worst thing someone can be.

While we were walking, we stumbled upon a giant tree, and all of a sudden a Pokemon jumped out from under the roots! I jumped in front and told the others that i would take care of this, they can go on and I'll meet them on the other side of the forest. They said ok and ran off.

I took out my pokedex, which was coded by Vestax, it turned out the pokemon was named Slayer333, I turned my hat backwards, and threw out my pokemon, Shade, and they did battle, at first it looked as if Slayer333 might win, but Shade did his special attack, Tree Shade! and Slayer333 fell to the ground. I captured him, and continued on my journey.

I kept going, and made it to the lake, which is halfway throw the forest of Edyit. I saw standing by the lake, a man, I went up to him and asked who he was, he said his name was The Marine Doctor, also known as TMDoc, I said how are you, and he said good. I kept going through the woods, and finally came upon Desy.. but upon closer inspection, I descovered she was dead! along with Reddeh! "Nooooooo" I cried out, and just as I did, as if heaven itself heard my plea, they both jumped up, full of life!

I asked them how they came back to life, and they said they were just sleeping. I said "oh" and we all continued through the woods.

As we got through the woods, we could clearly see the Mountain of Jonathan, and we skipped through the City of Gold, but we were stopped by a man called Freed, a King of some sorts. He was the ruler of all the money in the land, and he said we can't go up to the mountain unless we give him One Bazillion USD!! I said, "No way!", he then said ok, how about just one dollar? and just then Ranger came out of nowhere and jumped into Freed and pinned him down to the ground and yelled, Run Kids! Run and stop the evil Jonathan!

We ran and we made it to the foot of the mountain, Reddeh said, "Jee you guys, it looked a lot smaller when we were farther away." Just then, A goat came out of a hole and said his name was DarkDemon, Desy said that was a funny name for a little goat, and DarDemon said it was picked randomly from a phonebook by his parents, he can't change it for 30 years!! I said that's not nice, and I promised him when we beat Jonathan and got power over the land for good, I would change his name to something more resonable for him, like Billy.

We continued up the mountain, and about half way, a women stopped us, followed by another, and another, and another, and another, and another!!! I said Oh no, don't look at their books! They correct all the spelling ever made by man! and put in a funny comment or two. We fell to the ground, eyes covered by hands, and the Leader, Bast as she was known, stepped forward and took Desys arm, "You shall join us" she said, Just then BMW fell from the sky and cut the grasp of Bast just long enough for us to get away, as I look back, I saw as Bast had overcome BMW, and he turned into a dictionary. I shook my head, poor poor soul.

We were almost at the top of the mountain, and we started chatting because it was a long walk and we were bored. Desy said that she was having a nice day, and Reddeh said he was thinking of questions for his Trivia contest. I said thats nice, and we kept going.

We finally reached the top of the Mountain of Jonathan, it was very hot, and cold at the same time! almost... warm if you will. As soon as we stepped foot on the top, A magnificent thing happened, we saw Him, Jonathan was sitting in a throne, he gazed at us with superiority, and asked why we were there, we said that he was fooling around with the people with this land, making a bug spread across the market, making people lose actions for your own benefit and more and more! We said we are putting a stop to all of it, Now!

He said I shall stop, if you can answer one thing for me, I said ok, Bring it!
he said, would you rather this lovly lady Desy fall off the mountain, or would you rather have the power over the land. And with that he took Desy by the arm, and held her over the top of the mountain, she cried out, and I said, Don't worry Desy! I'll save you, and Reddeh turned into a wolf, and we prepared to do battle!

I took out my sword, and with Reddeh by my side, no one could stop us, Reddeh jumped at Jon, and in a flash, he was gone, and all that remain was a picture, it said 48!ed on it, I yelled, "Nooooo, Reddeh!!! you were so young!!"
I then remebered about Desy, hanging off the mountain, and I said that how could I accept power over love? one cannot have power without love, for love is truly the strongest power of all, is it not? So Jon chuckled to himself and simply said, "Noob." Then everything went white.


So, there you go, the Story of hope, honor, dedication, and love. Hope you enjoyed it, I might make a really long(accually good) story, and keep continuing it on for a while. Thanks!

Lukey.*Sorry if I offened anyone :p*

RomanceJunkieItami March 21 2006 10:50 PM EST

Excellent work Luke! *thumbs up / great job you :P
Will there be a second part by any chance?

RedWolf March 21 2006 10:52 PM EST

rofl that's awesome! Too bad i can't chat now for a while. lol, i love BMW's part ;-) but where the heck is Blarg, you bloddy canadian?? :P

DD34isback(justkidding) [Severswoed Accounting] March 21 2006 10:53 PM EST

yay im a goat :P billy? good work look forward to more

{CB1}Lukeyman March 21 2006 10:54 PM EST

Not a second part to this, but I'm going to be making a big story, like, a chapter every few days, and it will make a huge story! :D

BlueWolf March 21 2006 10:55 PM EST

I was offended, I WASN'T IN IT!! *cries histerically*

Admin{CB1}Slayer333 [SHIELD] March 21 2006 11:03 PM EST

/me carps lukeh.

DD34isback(justkidding) [Severswoed Accounting] March 21 2006 11:44 PM EST

ha slayer a goat is better then a pokemon :P

Vaynard [Fees Dirt Cheap] March 22 2006 12:45 AM EST

I'm not sure if you take requests, but feel free to add me in somewhere in future adventures if you would like. Good story though, it gave me a good laugh several times.

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 7:08 AM EST

Of Course, in the "Big" adventure I'm goin to try to get in EVERYONE in CB, haha, at least, all the ones I know and such :p I'm thinking of starting it tonight, don't know it, but each chapter won't be toooooo long, so bear with me :D

Revs March 22 2006 2:29 PM EST

You could keep the short installments coming each week or so. then compile the whole thing on Pixel's site. We need some more good fan fiction, and then a place to keep it all as well. Nice work, fun read =]

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 2:40 PM EST

Thanks, Good Idea Rev!

AdminShade March 22 2006 3:27 PM EST

since when am i a pokemon?

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 3:35 PM EST

I dunno, haha

Blarg March 22 2006 3:54 PM EST

How come I never get mentions in any of these stories? :P

{CB1}Lukeyman March 22 2006 5:01 PM EST

You will don't worry

AdminG Beee March 22 2006 5:28 PM EST

Since the movie came out Shade ;)

An enormous flaming chicken-like bird in WB's Pokemon: The Movie 2000

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