I wrote these, you like? (in Off-topic)

good ol]Newmcyo April 26 2006 2:37 AM EDT

Writer's Block: By Andrew Radie

Writer's Block,
A new hex on my brain,
I've gotta keep my head on, I've gotta maintain,
This steady state of mind
That I know I once had,
But it seems, for me, the milk of life
Has alread gone bad
My typical life's story,
As things start to go right,
I'm over come by an evil,
That's darker than night.
This darkness corrupts me,
Mind body and life,
And I go downhill
Throughout the ensuing strife.
Good versus Evil
Forces too strong to ignore,
I zone out as I undergo
An internal war.
I try to live my life,
And I try to get by.
I try to run and hide
Until the darkness subsides.
And soon the light starts shining in.
The pain begins to fade.
I feel my soul is running clean.
But I can't celebrate.
I know its a shallow victory,
'Cuz I've already learned
That the darkness always goes away,
But it always returns.

Truth: By Andrew Radie

True pain, true sorrow,
True misery, true fear...
True joy, true pleasure,
True happiness, true cheer...
Are never truely to be known,
Until you are chilled to the bone,
By mankind's greatest strength,
And weakness all at once,
It can make a bum feel like a king,
A genious, like a dunce.
We may try as we might,
But we will never rise above,
The truest emotion of them all,
The one that we call love.

MrC [DodgingTheEvilForgeFees] April 26 2006 8:21 AM EDT


It's actually fairly well written. That or it's just on my wavelength I'm not sure, but I like. :)

QBOddBird April 26 2006 8:52 AM EDT

I like the second one a lot. ^_^

Dragon Slayer April 26 2006 10:14 AM EDT

wow that second one is awesome

QBsutekh137 April 26 2006 10:47 AM EDT

Very nice!

AdminShade April 26 2006 3:34 PM EDT

quite nice! for an Andrew Radie :p

just kidding, nice ones :)

good ol]Newmcyo April 27 2006 12:09 AM EDT

'AN' Andrew Radie? I'll have you know that I am proud to be the ONLY person in the world with my name.

AdminShade April 27 2006 12:48 AM EDT

as am I, hence the joke ;)

Flamey April 27 2006 1:15 AM EDT

the second is cool, both great
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