The Battle of Alatar: Chapter 9 (in Off-topic)

{CB1}Lukeyman May 7 2006 9:48 PM EDT

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

Chapter 9

          Pixel bent down to Red and asked him if he was alright.
            "Yeah... I'm alright." Pixel went and looked at what Red was frightened by and felt a searing pain in his arm as he saw the mark of Shade etched into the bin with blood. He quickly turned around and told Red and Desy to just keep on going. Red and Desy led the way out of Hyrule and Pixel followed clutching his arm and wondering how he had gotten himself into this.
          Red, Desy and Pixel walked for what seemed like miles when they stumbled upon what looked like a ghost town.
            "Let's go over this way to see if there's somewhere we can find something to eat." said Pixel.
            "Sounds good to me" replied Red.
They walked around for a little and stumbled upon an old bar, they walked in and saw a shadey looking character behind the bar, Red had his hand on the hilt of his sword just in case and walked up to the man and asked where they were and who he was.
            "My name is Dennis, it's a pleasure to meet you, and as for your current whereabouts, you are at the town of Undertow, this bar is called Soup Ream, can I get you anything?"
            "Where is everyone?" asked Desy.
            "There.. around, some folks leave town this time of year, gets a little too hot for them."
            "Could we get some water then please?" asked Red.
            "Corse! Just sit tight, i'll be right back with it."
Red watched as Dennis left the room, and he turned to the other two.             "What do you think about this guy? Pixel, you're quiet, what is it?"
            "Nothing, nothing, I'm just a little.. uh... Tired, that's all." he replied.
            "Well, we should just get our water and--"
Red's voice trailed off as a dart caught him in the neck, and at the same time Desy fell to the ground. Pixel stood up and looked down the the two people that lay before him and he wiped a tear from his eye.

***I know, I know, it has been a long time, but I have decided, for all of you who read this, haha, that I will finish this story for you. And I know it's a short one, i'm getting back into it, don't worry, and I WILL do a full thing all together and checked over and things added and everything at the end. So please bear with me, we will get through all this.***

Mem May 7 2006 10:12 PM EDT

Interesting little twist there. Too short to sate my voracious appetite though. I need more!

(And no, I don't hate it.)

QBPixel Sage May 8 2006 2:41 AM EDT

I'm in the story, yet I haven't bothered reading it yet =P. Sorry for not making the story section in! Been a bit lazy/busy/lazy.

{CB1}Lukeyman May 8 2006 6:27 AM EDT

It's cool Pixey.

And This one was a little short because I am just getting back into it.

AdminShade May 8 2006 1:55 PM EDT

"There.. around, some folks leave town this time of year, gets a little too hot for them."

this should be "They're... around, ... "

AdminShade May 8 2006 1:56 PM EDT

but apart from that small error, a great story :D

I should host the complete story on cbstuff, if you want me to ;)

{CB1}Lukeyman May 8 2006 2:25 PM EDT

For the final copy that would be amazing Shade!!
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