The final winning entry of this contest. The description as revised by me so far is this:
Carnage Blender: A free text-based strategy RPG with an active, intelligent community of players, a strong in-game economy, and with regular changes and improvements to gameplay. Customize your team of minions with skills, spells and equipment. Fight for money, XP and glory then use the spoils to buy rare equipment. Make new friends, trade items with them, and kill them!
I wanted some feedback. So any small revisions that embody this same description are welcome.